The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams depict the draft plan of currently ground floor of a accomodation as well as its proposal for with some changes in building work.
The first impress from this plan is that there are more spaces in living room as well as new furniture installation in the kitchen.
Turning more details, in the existing floor plan, through the entrance gate of the housethe, the hall stairs is builded as a separated room of the house.Then, passing the hall stair, there are two door in the end of aisle to the living room and the kitchen which is the major space of this house.
On the contract, in the proposal plan, the hall stairs will rebuilted to make a way for simple stairs which play a crucial roles to enlarge the livingroom space. In addition, the storage under the stair will be removed togther with internal wall nearby. Furthermore, the door to the kitchen will be also rebuilded and replaced by a bigger one.For most of internal door and the rest part will remain as previous house. Last but not least, the kitchen furniture will set up around the corner of the kitchen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...draft plan of currently ground floor of a accomodation as well as its proposal fo...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...uilded as a separated room of the house.Then, passing the hall stair, there are two ...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'doors'?
Suggestion: doors
..., passing the hall stair, there are two door in the end of aisle to the living room ...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'door' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'doors'.
Suggestion: doors
..., passing the hall stair, there are two door in the end of aisle to the living room ...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
... for simple stairs which play a crucial roles to enlarge the livingroom space. In add...
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Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... rebuilded and replaced by a bigger one.For most of internal door and the rest part...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, then, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61658031088 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38175206359 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8272429506 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173937903324 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863459986775 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10384299266 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131574278286 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108691529348 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.