The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing task 1
The chart depicts the jobless issue in Australia in the year 2012.
As can be seen from the chart, the unemployment rate in rural area is always higher than big city area.
Firstly, in the first year 2012, the percentage of unemployment in countryside was exceeded than people in urban area with the former accounting for 6.5% and the later boasting 2%. Obviously, from first period, the number of people who lost their job in rural area decreased sharply from nearly 7% to 4.5%. At the same time, there was a twofold increase in urban area from 2% to 4%.
In the countryside, the percentage of unemployment situtation rise slowly by 1% in third quarter, but later remain stable at 5% until end of 2012.
In urban area, the number of jobless witness a reversed trend. Specificly, from 2nd to 3rd quarter of 2012, this rate fall dramatically by 2%, before experencing and rapidly increase and then reach a peak at 5% in the 4th quarter of 2012.
Overall, it is noticable that there are 2 general trend upwards and downwards alternately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 51, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
...t is noticable that there are 2 general trend upwards and downwards alternately.
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Line 6, column 51, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'trend' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'trends'.
Suggestion: trends
...t is noticable that there are 2 general trend upwards and downwards alternately.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71978021978 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64009130821 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.747608409 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111092421409 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052343182578 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053073581893 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683572161326 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540910323473 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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