The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
The statement linking with luxuries and conveniences is trying to bridge between comforts and self-development. Now here let us bring the ants into the picture, there was an ant colony, there lives a lazy ant, disinterested and unable to go for food collection in the winter, will definitely suffer for the summer, where they cannot sustain those hot breezes. here, the comforts at one time are making sufferers in another time. one should always accept too many comforts makes us lazy and dizzy sometimes. Today, we are using many people who are born rich and experiences many luxuries from the beginning, these kinds of people may not know how to live without support. . On the other hand, we see many people again who are starving for food and they become more efficient and strong enough to lead the life.
However, there are many benefits are available, if limited luxuries luxuries " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">are experienced, Depending on luxuries does not preclude that people become weathe example of Ratan Tata, fortunately, he is one of the richest persons in India by birth. but his having all comforts and conveniences, his dedication, and his focus made him a famous and admirable personality in the world. This implies, that having permissible access to luxuries and determination to achieve something will make a stronger human being. Looking back to the statement, at first glance it seems, luxuries will negatively impact lives, but on a close examination, those luxuries and conveniences for the right people will will " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">make a revolution.
s to the public is really making people more comfortable and they are not in the battle to fight against the challenges. here, all the required things are provided by the government by the competitive political parties is making a weak society by providing all necessities.
In conclusion, more comforts , luxuries will make a unfocused people,es is making
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33742331288 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21927544399 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9507984795 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143601361574 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491665287736 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426894283316 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731905741581 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409391665373 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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