Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir,
I intend to write this course to show my interest in enrollment in the computer course that your organization have listed in the newspaper today. I have studied commerce throughout my academic span but i always had a keen interest in exploring the computer world and sharpen my skill in this domain as well. I am a full-time working professional where i have to perform different tasks on the computer day in day out. Owing to lack of my knowledge i cannot pace up my work on the computer and lack behind in efficiency.
Unfortunately, despite being an eager computer learner i could not attend any educational course related to computer studies. I know the for the admission in your advertised course it is mandatory to have an elementary course but as i stated my circumstances earlier i do not hold such certification. Therefore, i request you to please exempt this pre-requisite and grant me admission so i can bring efficiency in my work and progress in my career.
I look forward to your support in this regard.
Yours sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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... day out. Owing to lack of my knowledge i cannot pace up my work on the computer ...
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...despite being an eager computer learner i could not attend any educational course...
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...ory to have an elementary course but as i stated my circumstances earlier i do no...
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...ut as i stated my circumstances earlier i do not hold such certification. Therefo...
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...not hold such certification. Therefore, i request you to please exempt this pre-r...
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...pre-requisite and grant me admission so i can bring efficiency in my work and pro...
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...port in this regard. Yours sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79781420765 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00526576591 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5777229941 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297391350421 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108071963425 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815245040707 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161213406913 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114406724693 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.