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- Full time university students spend most of the time in studying They should do other activities too To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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- The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian university 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... independently there no need to do such a think and can proceed with the pace we like. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e pros and cons in the team activities, ones opinion depend completely on the kind o...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, i feel, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24431818182 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22233189224 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471590909091 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8078222333 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279300235563 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116583232191 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809237059723 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172705100991 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834512330358 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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