In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, lifestyles in people become more debatable. Some say that these changes in lifestyles have effects on family relationships, while others do not think in this way. In this essay, I will explain both advantages and disadvantages of lifestyles and why I think it brings more positive developments.
To embarks with, the internet plays a major role in lifestyles in humans. People become more dependent on electronic devices. In fact, this may lead to them having less interaction with family members and relatives. In addition, if people have fewer conversations with close ones, leading to having more mental illness in long run as well. For instance, a survey showed that nearly 85% of participants had a mental disorder due to spending more time on social networks and devices than family members in the long run in Japan. Therefore, the fewer interactions happen in families, the more chances of having mental disorders.
On the other hand, however, these lifestyles have many positive points such as people become more fitness-oriented, and they eat healthier food. If people start to eat more vegetables and fruits as a part of a diet, they become healthier. This may lead them to spend more time in workplaces and their life expectancy will increase. Research by the University of Yale, for example, concluded humans who ate more boil vegetables, have fewer chances to have physical problems. Hence, the more they eat greenish veggies and fruits, the more they become physically strong.
In conclusion, although lifestyles have negative impacts on people life laziness and mental disorders, people become more physically fit and improvements in life expectancy were observed. So, in my words, despite having several demerits of these lifestyles, its advantages are superior to its disadvantages for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90872851015 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9518432651 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169894956636 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674933415741 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635419761414 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133124382681 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968090526749 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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