In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary life, there is a rapid change in people’s lifestyle and this phenomenon has a remarkable influence on family relationships. In my opinion, this tendency comes with both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, changing lifestyle in social activities brings about various positive impacts on family relationships. Firstly, people are more concerned about well-being today so families go to fitness centers together more often. Clearly, this can help bridge the generation gap and promote better communication among family members. Secondly, cutting-edge technology also plays a pivotal role in strengthening family bonds. Thanks to the advance of technology, many digital devices, especially smartphones, laptops have not only become an indispensable part of daily life, but they also motivate communication among friends and families much easier.
On the other hand, adverse impacts are also worth considering when people change lifestyles so fast. Heavy exposure to such means of technology can hurt family relationships and create an invisible barrier in the domestic environment. To illustrate, when each person has an internet-connected device, there will be no communication in the family as people tend to be addicted to surfing online or playing games. Furthermore, in today’s society, people are becoming more career-oriented and subsequently losing the balance between work and family life. In fact, in many households, that parents are too busy to stay at home and raise their children, even outside of official working time, which has led to weakening family interactions.
In conclusion, while the rapidly changing lifestyle is advantageous in some ways, there are several negative impacts as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70384615385 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23039146143 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1508988013 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264936674195 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936208852216 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580651522344 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176435206435 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437296928254 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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