Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In 20 years there will be less pollution in the air than there is today.
Some people state that with the underway situation nowadays, our future will be surrounded sheer by pollution and everyone will suffer the consequences. However, others think otherwise. They agree that there will be many ways to stop pollution and scientists are already working on the matter for doing so. In my opinion, as the society is growing at very quick step, we will suffer with pollution in the future. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, we as a community are growing exponentially pace and if we take a look the nuances we can see that our future is already compromised by too much pollution. For example, each person born today will be receiving a car to accomplish his duty may be for work usage or for merely have fun by travelling to the beach or having fun with friends. Let's also supposed that for each family there will be two or three children, then the number of cars will be doubled or tripled, this way there is going to be much more pollution in the future than we have today. Therefore, this example elucidates that our future pollution will be surpassed by today one.
Moreover, as the industry sector is also exponentially growing we will again have more pollution than what we already have. For instance, each following year the number of industries is growing very fast and this will impact badly the environment because not only will they be releasing CO2 to the atmosphere , but also they releasing trash to water, as a consequence we may be devoid of clean water and we may end up facing some arid climate. This way our environment will become bad for living. Thus, this instance clarifies that with the ongoing scene we will not have a good place to live in.
Furthermore, as mentioned earlier the more children are born today, the more pollution on the water we will have and the summation of the facts will be that our future will be way ahead have more pollution than today. Hence, this states that we will have pollution in the air and on the water.
Finally, I strongly believe that our future will have more pollution than today because the number of people born today will contribute for it as well as the industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...o the beach or having fun with friends. Lets also supposed that for each family ther...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... they be releasing CO2 to the atmosphere , but also they releasing trash to water,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48449481665 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3333213326 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285879093918 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116849157392 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690066394397 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197206339011 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343356421608 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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