The increased world demand for oil and gas has made it necessary for locating these sources in remote and untouched natural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (For Drilling).
Owing to the rapid development of the human race, the essentials of energy such as oil and gas are pulling out to our demands. Thus, seeking a natural source from places such as Antarctica or Alaska where almost few others approached are totally indispensable. From my perspective, I believed that drilling precious natural resources will offer more upside to our day-to-day.
Concerning the economy, it is irrefutable that implementing to drill project for serving to business activities which might be obtained at a profit in one country. What it means is the price of energy usage will be low at utilizing power in the industrial zone. To be clarified the electricity is made from oil and gas so if they can figure it out to be a source of these energies, contributing is extremely significant. Furthermore, it goes without saying that if there is more drilling, the nation’s income witnessed a considerable soar that people who live in such nation might to more opportunities job in this fields. In addition, oil import increases and consequently, the nation will upgrade to a wealthy country of leading a top of GDP.
On the positive side, it is not denied that the basics of people life would to comprehensive accommodated. Indeed, since the cost of oil and gas at lower, many people can make use of these energies with compatibility of their income. For instance, when winter is coming, the demand for oil and gas is gradually increasing so that if they are at rational prices, the well-being of an individual will be satisfied.
In conclusion, drilling from remote areas should be proposed to provide for all the needs of human beings. If the world is falling into an energy crisis, inflation can be able to occur. Eventually, it is hardly rectifying this matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tion might to more opportunities job in this fields. In addition, oil import increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91029900332 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95308287168 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9775576454 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229734396688 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673948920425 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675101710888 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134557713585 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397626376459 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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