In the ultra-modern epoch, it is part of the debate that whether people should choose job satisfaction over big salary. An equal number of people opines in the favor because job satisfaction gives sense of fulfillment, however, others are hesitant it by saying money is the essential tool for survival. In my view, I partially agree, the following paragraph would caste light on my personal perspective with an apt example.
To begin with, having a big salary has a multifarious reasons are possible for my outlook. The first and most prominent one is daily expenses required Money. Because, money is necessity of life and for the payment of expense it requires money and it would be only possible if individual gave preference to wage. For instance, employee working 10-12 hours to buy their dream house or dream car.
On the second thought, a couple of reasons drive to the opposite notation as well such as internal happiness. Many people gave priority to peace of mind because it keeps motivated and it directly proportional to productivity and therefore it leads to career growth. To justify the standpoint, there is an epitome, Jeff Bezos leave his work despite a good salary in Mac Donald's and ventured to become an entrepreneur and after enduring years of ups and down he became the most successful entrepreneur of this era.
In recapitulation, people who gave preference to huge salary has their own dream such as to buy house and car. I personally agree job satisfaction should be given because Excel in work will promote in salary as well as status.
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- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...ebate that whether people should choose job satisfaction over big salary. An equal ...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
Suggestion: reason
... having a big salary has a multifarious reasons are possible for my outlook. The first ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92452830189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79496572299 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1537084673 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110656745884 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413204652421 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533742795324 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714887990408 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485361490382 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.