Some people believe that reading books are better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Presently, some proportion of masses assert that reading books are beneficial for juveniles as compared to playing computer games or watching television. Here, I would like to Accord with the given statement.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to support my point of view. First and foremost, reading books are instrumental in enhancing offsprings imagination Power. To elucidate, peoples are expected to imagine the given text while reading books and it plays a phenomenal role in sharpening the mental abilities of Juveniles. Moreover, the role of reading books is terrific to increase the concentration as it requires intellectual endeavours. On the other side, availability of several kind of games on computer and television act as a stumbling block in the concentration of children's. Therefore, reading books holds more advantages for children rather than watching TV or playing games.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Initially, reading books help pupils to improve their reading skills. For example, as numerous stories are given in their mother language and it assist the children to learn vocabulary. Besides this, children can get enormous knowledge related to particular language. It is apparently seen that, the benefits of reading books are more as compared to playing computer games and television. Adding to it, silver screen of television and computer has adverse effects on juveniles eyesight and they have several health ailments.
To recapitulate, undeniably television and computer games are stupendous source of amusement. However, I still believe, the merits of reading books cannot be underestimated as it contributes ramarkably in the overall development of children.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...urs. On the other side, availability of several kind of games on computer and television act...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...r than watching TV or playing games. Further emphasizing on my point of view. Initia...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...e given in their mother language and it assist the children to learn vocabulary. Besid...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the benefits of reading books are more as compared to playing computer games and ...
^^
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'juveniles'' or 'juvenile's'?
Suggestion: juveniles'; juvenile's
...ion and computer has adverse effects on juveniles eyesight and they have several health a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57471264368 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06081592378 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9435321025 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335577909988 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100223862858 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923937214351 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203765982166 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473245945099 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...urs. On the other side, availability of several kind of games on computer and television act...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...r than watching TV or playing games. Further emphasizing on my point of view. Initia...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...e given in their mother language and it assist the children to learn vocabulary. Besid...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the benefits of reading books are more as compared to playing computer games and ...
^^
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'juveniles'' or 'juvenile's'?
Suggestion: juveniles'; juvenile's
...ion and computer has adverse effects on juveniles eyesight and they have several health a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57471264368 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06081592378 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9435321025 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335577909988 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100223862858 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923937214351 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203765982166 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473245945099 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.