Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
people are different and their perceptions too. Some people think that difficult hobbies are more enjoyable than easy hobbies, but others oppose. In my opinion both easy and difficult hobbies are equally have fun and excitments.
Hobbies are activites choosen by people to fill their leisure time without expecting monitory benefits. Thus the ultimate aim of hobbies are enjoyment and relaxation. People can select different hobbies according to their available free time, nature of daily work and interest. Some people find enjoyment in easy hobbies like reading. After a full day's hard work it gives them physical relaxation. Besides reading books can help them to create theirown world with different characters of the book and provide greater pleasure in imagination. Though it is an easy hobby nobody can deny it by saying that it is not enjoyable as it is an easy hobby.
Apparently, difficult hobbies like bike stunding and baggi jumbing also gives enjoyment to the people who follow it. These hobbies offer them an oppertunity to show their bravery, and improve their mental power to face and confront dangers and difficulties. Furthermore, this gives a chance to burst out the tensions of spectators too. As it is a hard task it need constant hard work to achieve the goal. But dedication, constant long hard work and practice let them to be prefect in their hobbies. Additionally, these people may not always get the same lavel of enjoyment. The greater the performence, the higher the satisfaction will be.
To conclude, it not the name or difficulty of a hobby make it enjoyable, but the attitude and interest of the people towards it. After analyzing both sides I feel that both easy and difficult hobbies are equally entertaining for people who select it.
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Sentence: Besides reading books can help them to create theirown world with different characters of the book and provide greater pleasure in imagination.
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Sentence: These hobbies offer them an oppertunity to show their bravery, and improve their mental power to face and confront dangers and difficulties.
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Sentence: But dedication, constant long hard work and practice let them to be prefect in their hobbies.
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Sentence: The greater the performence, the higher the satisfaction will be.
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