In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
There is no doubt that a home is a permanent address and a place to relax for many people. Some believe being a homeowner is better than being a renter. It is probably because the owners have more freedom to change and decorate their home in any way they want when compared to the same of a rantee. I consider that a increase in the numbers of homeowners would have a negative impact on the society, the economy and the environment as well.
Firstly, homeowners have more right on their homes than the tenants. As a result, they can send eviction notice whenever they want. In order to not to become a homeless person, many people started to build their own residents. Furthermore, renters always need to have permission from the house owners to change any structure of the property to their own liking where many house owners do not even live in. Besides, sometimes lenders do not even provide financial support to fix any issues that might come with the property. Finally, to avoid all these problems, people of some countries are opting to become homeowners and reside in their own houses. In addition, owning a house means gaining financial stability as the resident do not have to pay rents as well as more respect from the society. In developing countries like Bangladesh or India, people are now choosing to own houses instead renting one as a consequence.
As more people are building their houses, more land is being used for accommodation which might have been utilized for farming or forestry. Deforestation has become number one concern of some countries as an outcome. Moreover, individuals who live in a rented house are looked down upon by the fellow society members. There is a shift in the moral of a community as some are even trying to make money in illegal ways to own properties and become a respectable member of the society.
In conclusion, owning home is not a necessity. The government should make proper policies to accommodate the tenant and make them feel safer and respected in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78062678063 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61402803889 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1774606482 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213989385978 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070929940713 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465441410906 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123126361761 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470949650143 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.