The two pie charts illustrate the figures for different factors that make people happy the most of those who are under 30 and over 30. Generally, both under 30 and over 30 feel happy when they achieve good results at work or do their hobbies. However, with the left factors, people who are under 30 seem to be happy when they have a good appearance and travel while stability is what makes those over 30 cheerful.
With achievement at work, the percentage of 2 groups are the same with 32%, this is also the highest number of both. In contrast, with doing hobbies, the figure for those over 30 is 24%, higher than under 30 2%.
People under 30 also feel happy when they make a good appearance and travel, however, the percentage of travelling is 15%, lower than having a good appearance 3%. Turning to people over 30, they are joyful when being with family, accounting for 14% while the number of financial security is 20%, 4% higher. With other reasons, under 30 is a bit higher with 14% while over 30 shows the figure of 10%.
The two pie charts illustrate the figures for different factors that make people happy the most of those who are under 30 and over 30. Generally, both under 30 and over 30 feel happy when they achieve good results at work or do their hobbies. However, with the left factors, people who are under 30 seem to be happy when they have a good appearance and travel while stability is what makes those over 30 cheerful.
With achievement at work, the percentage of 2 groups are the same with 32%, this is also the highest number of both. In contrast, with doing hobbies, the figure for those over 30 is 24%, higher than under 30 2%.
People under 30 also feel happy when they make a good appearance and travel, however, the percentage of travelling is 15%, lower than having a good appearance 3%. Turning to people over 30, they are joyful when being with family, accounting for 14% while the number of financial security is 20%, 4% higher. With other reasons, under 30 is a bit higher with 14% while over 30 shows the figure of 10%.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'feel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...0. Generally, both under 30 and over 30 feel happy when they achieve good results at...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23447310947 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8691137283 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.712754479331 0.215688989381 330% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.378526324162 0.103423049105 366% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18810422771 0.0843802449381 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.527410457825 0.15604864568 338% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201172912384 0.0819641961636 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'feel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...0. Generally, both under 30 and over 30 feel happy when they achieve good results at...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23447310947 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8691137283 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.712754479331 0.215688989381 330% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.378526324162 0.103423049105 366% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18810422771 0.0843802449381 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.527410457825 0.15604864568 338% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201172912384 0.0819641961636 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.