The graphs illustrate the number of pineapples exported from 3 diffierent nations in the years of 2009 and 2019, along with the elements affecting to the price of a pineapple by 2019.
It can be clearly seen in the first bar chart that country A and C had a rise in world pineapple exports. Particularly, country A gained a rocket figure which was from around 1 million metric tonnes in the first year shown to over 10 million metric tonnes in the later year. Meanwhile, country C achieved a slight excess in 2019 with about 0.5 million metric tonnes. In contrast, country B was the only nation having a slump in the amount of exported pineapples. It decreased from nearly 5 million metric tonnes to just less than 2 million metric tonnes in the same period compared. However, it was still much higher than country C in which was considered as the weakest pineapple-producing countries among the three.
On the other hand, the pie chart shows us the largest ratio in breakdown of cost per pineapple was for distribution & retail (35%). Unlike the export costs possessed the lowest rate (only 4%). Hence, export costs obviously did not influence on the price charge consumers as other types of costs. There were also 5 out of 8 elements having the percentage of 10% and above, which were import licences, international transport, taxes, profit and distribution & retail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, while, as for, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83760683761 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76213990128 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6840429651 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.23603664747 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273895398163 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103042851209 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867697942346 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198660451022 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650910102553 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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