In the modern days, people are living in a complicated society where there are many tasks that need to be completed. It has led to the change of their eating habits. Instead of cooking at home and enjoying the meals with all family members around, some families just buy foods outside and do not eat together. This essay will discuss about factors affecting this changing habit and clarify the tendency of eating out.
In the past, having dinner together could be seen in almost every household after a busy day. This was truly a precious time for everyone to talk about their day and confess their emotions with the utmost beloved ones sitting around while devouring home-made dishes, which were cost-saving yet nutritious and delicious. Such a simple meal could still bring priceless moments though. I am specially sympathized with that cosy atmospheres because my family did the same thing until I went abroad for studying.
Nowadays, the busy lifetime has influenced the meal quality of individuals and households in general. Imagine that a family with 4 members having their own missions to attain. Some must complete deadlines at school or workplace and they have no way but ordering foods from merchants, others have dinner with couterparts to discuss business. Some even do not have time to enjoy a decent meal, so they tend to rush a sandwich or a hamburger then continue working. This is the reason why more and more restaurants with take-away service like Mc Donalds, Subway, Lotteria, etc. have been constructed every year, so the demand of immediate food serving can be adapted, despite of the high prices.
In conclusion, I fully believe fast-paced environment that we are living today make a lot of profit for fast-food businesses. However, this cannot be considered as a positive development on the humantary aspects as it blurs the values of sharing and communicating between members of a family, which is a network that should not be loosen because family is the place for everyone to come back and heal themselves agaist daily stress. In addition, foods cooking at home always have flavourable taste with very reasonable prices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01955307263 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61333861488 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645251396648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6669534057 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.705882353 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19999574281 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595015741026 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652541312799 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119626824381 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369387681313 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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