Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Consumer culture is now being a vital problem throughout the youth due to their lack of ways to spending money wisely. Therefore, a majority of people assume that schools should play a role in educating students in financial survival in the world at present. From my perspective, I totally see this view as a flawed and in this paper, I would provide justification to prove my opinion.
First of all, there is not enough time for children to attend extra classes about consuming money. Since at schools, a myriad of subjects is waited for youngsters to expose, discover and absorb them, which means that time is lacked for them to take part in extra curriculum classes. For example, in Vietnam, more than 10 subjects are being taught at schools a week, providing students with no time to learn more about life skills. Therefore, schools should be the place in which their attendees focus on broadening their academic knowledge.
Moreover, parents are the most appropriate one who can in charge of educating their children in surviving financially. Thanks to the closeness to their parents can youngsters observe and learn something indirectly. Additionally, not only can children obtain skills from their parents, but also mom and dad are the finest role models for their kids to imitate their spending habits. For instance, a mother who usually bargained in front of her child would acts as an example for her child to follow her in the future. Thus, responsibility ought to be taken by parents in order to help their kids how to use money smartly.
In conclusion, learning how to handle money is a necessary ability which contributes a great deal to the later success in the youth. However, only learning from parents can children fully understand the ways of using it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'act'
Suggestion: act
...y bargained in front of her child would acts as an example for her child to follow h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66445533313 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4105150673 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146033179564 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526987066546 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540761968506 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854568540313 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497205063094 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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