The advantages and disadvantages of the internet
In this day and age, people live in the world of technology and internet, and there is no denying that internet gives people many benefits and helps them do a lot of things in life. However, people cannot avoid some problems and drawbacks which internet causes. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the internet.
One evident benefit to using internet is that it gives a chance to communicate with people in virtually in any part of the world. People are living in the COVID-19 pandemic, so everything is kept indoor and we cannot meet our friends or relatives in person. Therefore, the best way to stay safe is that people work, study and connect through internet by video call and messages. Another benefit is that internet is a powerful search engines. When people have any question in their mind, they can have the answer for that question in a split second by searching on the internet. There are a lot of available and useful information in the internet. In addition, internet is now a place to shopping. Everything can be bought on the internet in a few second with simple procedure. For example, instead of going to the supermarket to buy a pizza in thirty minutes or an hour driving, buyers just use their mobile phone and order the pizza by a few simple steps, and then they can have it in 5 to 10 minutes.
On the contrary, for all its advantages, the internet has its ugly sides too. Firstly, there is a lot of information in the internet, but it has much unchecked information. When a student search about why the sky is blue, plenty of information will appear, and they do not know which is the reliable information. Similarly, it can confuse people by chaos and take a lot of time of user to find a good result. Secondly, it is the privacy problem. To sign in or buy something online, customers have to provide their personal information, and the online security policies are still not really safe and effective. Therefore, the information of clients can be stolen and used for inadequate purposes. Finally, internet can create addiction. For instance, it is easy to see the children and their parents spend hours playing video games or surfing social networks instead of reading book or talking to each other. Moreover, people see the world in the internet more important than the real life.
Taking everything into consideration, internet has the crucial role nowadays. It gives opportunities to communicate, the tool to search, and the place to shop. However, wrong information, privacy problem, and addiction are some drawbacks of internet. Therefore, people should know how to use it appropriate way and make it as a tool to support our work and life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...hing can be bought on the internet in a few second with simple procedure. For example, ins...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'appropriates'?
Suggestion: appropriates
...efore, people should know how to use it appropriate way and make it as a tool to support ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 467.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76017130621 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68677659742 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503211991435 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2409721616 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88461538462 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194113060383 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707686670671 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589886775217 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137629036854 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356149230867 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.