Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements
People live in an age when advertisements are surrounded all daily media, and it plays a viral role in human life. Customers and businessman cannot deny that advertisements are considered to be beneficial, but they can have numerous drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several reason why advertisement is advantageous. Firstly, it helps attract new customers for the market expansion. By the way advertising on various platforms, producers can reach large numbers of profitable customers. For example, the candy company targets children to sale their products, so they use television commercials on children's television show or advertising on video games. Secondly, clients can have more information about products through advertising, so they can afford the best product with suitable prices. Indeed, producers want to promote sales, so they use advertising campaigns to enhance awareness about their products and give the best prices for their customers. Besides, newly-launched products will be advertised with a lot of discount for people. Finally, advertisements help create job for many people. When advertising is developing like today, it needs a large number of workers or staff in the field of marketing. Therefore, the unemployment will be decreased and the finances will improve.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of advertisements that people should take into consideration. One drawback is that it is annoying for consumers. For instance, when people read documents on the internet, they are usually interrupted by some pay-per-click ads to be placed at the side of the screen, so it disturbs readers. Another disadvantage is that producers exaggerated the qualities of their products. It is easy for people to find a products with series of functions, but these functions are not verified. Therefore, customers can be easily deceived if they believe what is written or broadcast on the advertisements when they do not have the awareness about this products. Besides, hundred of ads are design eye-catching adverts to attract customers, so it can cause confusing for people about what is real images about this product.
In conclusion, advertising has certain benefits to the manufacturers as well as to the customers. However, it can cause some problems affecting our consumption, so people should consider ads as a reference tool and should not depend on it too much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 911, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...sing is developing like today, it needs a large number of workers or staff in the field of market...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...products. It is easy for people to find a products with series of functions, but these fun...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...en they do not have the awareness about this products. Besides, hundred of ads are d...
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Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...awareness about this products. Besides, hundred of ads are design eye-catching adverts ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37931034483 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16446401532 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543766578249 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3069119237 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61904761905 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149014049504 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558223130369 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516680357581 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929975212334 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263744587108 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.