Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad? Give your own opinion.
These days, there have been many students who pursue further study in other countries. Studying abroad may help these people develop their soft skills and have a chance to meet new friends from different countries. However, I think they should consider their decision carefully because studying and living abroad brings them far away from their hometown and family.
On the one hand, traveling to another nation to study can be a great experience for a student. First, his soft-skills can be improved. To explain, when living and studying abroad, one might deal with numerous problems about accommodation and misunderstanding. If he wants to continue his learning, he needs to improve the problem solving skills and the communication skill so that he can be supported by others to tackle the issues. Moreover, traveling abroad also means meeting new friends. Without friends, the student may feel lonely, and bored as they do not have anyone to share that happiness and sadness as a result. It is important to make friends in other countries when sleeping and studying approaches.
On the other hand, studying University or colleges outside one's Nation might have numerous downsides. The difference in cultures is one of the major problems. As each country has their own beliefs and Customs, conflicts may happen due to misunderstanding. Moreover, one sometimes may feel homesick and lonely when staying far away from family. If he cannot adapt to the new environment, he may feel tired and could have the decision of moving back to his country.
In conclusion, pursuing higher education abroad can help students improve soft skills and meet new people; however, they might suffer from homesickness and cultural conflicts. In my opinion studying is important So the students decide where to study carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20890410959 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76312567264 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3351045881 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4705882353 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262252181647 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882456223028 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820757626597 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178516755224 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871382779887 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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