Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society.
Overpopulation is nowadays a rising problem in the world on which we are living. Numerous people hold a school of thought that the increasing population would bring adverse effects on our world and render a universal crisis. In contrast, the others have the opposite view that it can provide human with potential merits and is essential for the world 's development. From my point of view, I subscribe to the former as it appears to be well-grounded for me.
On one hand, the outnumbered of population could be beneficial to the world 's economy. In terms of finance, thanks to the soaring population do each nation has more qualified employees to contribute to the prosperous in economy of that country. For example, China is a country where the population rate has grown significantly in recent years but it is also regarded as the world 's factory since there is abundance of worker who are always ready to dedicate to their country.
On the other hand, population explosion can have negative impacts on the world. The more babies are born, the more burdens are placed on the environment as it has to supply both human and animal with accommodation and living habitat. Therefore, it is no doubt that the problem of environmental pollution would be more exacerbated and influences all living creatures on the world with the shortage of home, health issue. Moreover, such a crowded world people are living in that they will have to competitive dreadfully to gain a stable career for themselves in the future. We are in a hyper competitive world where only make intensive efforts do we achieve success. As a result, human is placed on more profound pressure which would cause mental illness such as depression, distress, exhaustion and more badly, suicide. Japan is the typical country in which the level of suicide people for pressure is rising day by day. Consequently, the population boom is a critical problem, which can result in detrimental effects on the world and human.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the positive side of overpopulation, it is a serious phenomenon that we should take more measures to avoid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95786516854 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93636347602 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8112557238 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254662302059 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878993945339 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713938428597 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138536623382 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811467773221 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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