Nowadays, TV and newspapers are publishing more news on crime and violence. Some people believe that this should be stopped as it is harmful to our society. However, up to certain extent I disagree with above statement as because of it, we make ourselves ready against such brutal crimes.
To start with, some people have opinion that crime and rape news always create negative impression in the community. By watching these types of news continuously, some teenagers and youngsters may go on wrong path, which not only create bad impact on their lives but also establish wrong example in the socie...
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