It is a common phenomenon that people together pour into cities for the seek of new job opportunities, which can pave the way for the appearance of numerous social problems. Therefore, the densely-populated cities should be high on the government's agenda. This essay will shed light on serious consequences resulting from this mentioned issue as well as propose effective measures to tackle with it.
Because of the excessive number of residents gathering on cities, various pressing concerns emerging as a result of this phenomenon. Firstly, lack of accommodation is known as an eminent drawback. This is due to the fact that the population has increased with the soaring rate whereas residential areas are limited in terms of size, which can not meet citizens' demand for housing. Another problem can be listed is that the appearance of several social issues, typically crime. Because the population density of cities are becoming crowded, the local authorities have to confront with many difficulties in controlling the public security. This could pose a threat to the inhabitants' welfare before the co-existence of crimes. For example, New York witnessed a significant rise in the proportion of crimes between 2000 and 2015 when the wave for immigration taking place in this city to address career problems.
For the long-run sake of both individuals and cities, the government should prioritize solving these disadvantages coming from overpopulation. To begin with, the relocation of companies and manufactures to rural areas can be a feasible solution since people have a tendency to move to cities mostly for job opportunities. If this measure can be taken, it exerts various positive impacts on not only improving the central environment but also diminishing housing- related issues. In addition, the government can enact strict legislations to adjust citizens in terms of their behavior and awareness. Thanks to that, the overall conscious level of people is boosted and the number of criminals can be declined as well.
In conclusion, overpopulation is the culprit behind numerous dangerous problems such as housing shortage and crimes. Therefore, the government should immediately combat with these dangers to cater for residents' basic needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04413450869 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599431818182 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5627866859 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23501614472 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691409892011 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603704586989 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137838914111 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386538606895 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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