Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter
1. suggest how could you help her in her home
2. say why you would like to do this work
3. explain when you will and will not be available
I hope you are doing well. Recently I came across an advertisement in local newspaper that you will require someone to help with your daily chores next year over the summer. I would like to support you in this.
You need not to worry about your garden, as I can take good care of you plants as I have beed doing this at my home as well. I am capable of doing things to keep garden clean and tidy for instance chopping of bushes, trimming grass, removing weeds from plants. Adding to this, I could help you in kitchen with dishes. However if you require any assistance in dusting and vaccuming, you have my helping hand.
So students have ample amount of time during summers to gain new experiences and knowlegde of mutiple things except from books. I feel assisting you at your residence will help me in handling things indpendentaly. This will be helpful to boost my confidence as well as social skills . Cherry on top of all this will be, I can earn some extra pocket money which I can utilize to lease a car.
As I have taken extra courses, I will be available for two hours in morning from 8 am to 10 am. In evening, I could be at your place from 5 pm to 7 pm. During day time I have one shift at grocery store, so I am unvailable during that time.
I hope you will consider my name. I would be looking forward to get a revert from you.
Thanks and Regard
Niharika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
... support you in this. You need not to worry about your garden, as I can take good c...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... could help you in kitchen with dishes. However if you require any assistance in dusti...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with dishes. However if you require any assistance in dusting and vaccuming, you...
^^
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t my confidence as well as social skills . Cherry on top of all this will be, I ca...
^^
Line 12, column 62, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...der my name. I would be looking forward to get a revert from you. Thanks and Regar...
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Line 12, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...name. I would be looking forward to get a revert from you. Thanks and Regard Nihari...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you. Thanks and Regard Niharika
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, for instance, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35249042146 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34184489565 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9611894323 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8235294118 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186220841314 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667278183035 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488396776531 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115566096765 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564114647065 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.