Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is claimed that protecting the indigenous environment is the duty of local citizens instead of government. while some people agree with this statement, I cogitate that both government and each individual play a vital role in preserving environment.
On the one hand, there are several practical actions of authorities should be taken into account when it comes to environment protection. First and foremost, it is advisable that government are able to enact law and punish stringently some law-breakers like manufacturers or factories which illegally release dangerous chemicals into environment. Thanks to these severe penalties, it is extremely beneficial to eliminate the wrongdoings of organizations. Another practical solution is that government ought to have some campaigns associated with preserving surrounding environment. For instance, it is necessary for the state to clarify the conditions and rules for each area and reward any place where people are able to protect their surrounding living areas and satisfy sufficient conditions that government required.
On the other hand, each person in community also has a huge impact on the environment preservation. To commence with, each individual is able to do some micro actions such as throwing rubbish away in the right place and using the public transport instead of private vehicles which produce such a large amount of exhaust fume, thus resulting in micro positive effects in the long time. Indeed, due to the low individual consciousness, the pollution in air and living conditions is getting worse every single day. In addition, another effective method that is feasible to carry out in the foreseeable future is the cooperation of the Government and each citizen. This could be done by not littering and going hand-in-hand with the state in reserving the environment.
In conclusion, in order to protect the surrounding environment, both government and citizens have to cooperate to protect environment throughout some feasible remedies such as practical campaigns coming from authorities and enhancing awareness of each person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... conditions that government required. On the other hand, each person in commun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55900621118 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12295764826 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5748930622 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.692307692 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200979411808 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677056868475 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413059206706 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132672742277 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276703981005 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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