Advice
Dear A,
I am writing to reply reoccupation you asked me should you pursue to go to the college or endeavor to get a job. I cogitated, during one week ago, getting a career is better for you. I would like to reason why.
First of all, I will indicate the disadvantages of learning on college. I think you would not enjoy it. As you know, it would be taken a long time to review all the knowledges because you had two gap years. It is difficult if you require any assistance to aid for revising because you have to contact with other pupils who are on the same age. In addition, the costs for all colleges in America are extortionate and I think it is waste of money to go to school.
Next, I would like to acquaint you why getting a job is a good idea for you. The most value point is experience. When you have an occupation, you will have lots of opportunity to collide with many intricate matters from working. Hence, you will accumulate precious lessons which is adequate foundation for you.
Lastly, you good at English communication skill as well as have an amenity for taking a construction relationships with every one around. Consequently, getting a work in an environment as hotel or restaurant would be appropriate for you.
I am always glad to assist you, so please keep in touch and let me know what you decide
Your faithfully,
B
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...now what you decide Your faithfully, B
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, lastly, so, well, i think, in addition, you know, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47773279352 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7499566007 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3094258741 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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