When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In cutting-edge era, many new ways are introduced by the help of which individuals can spend their spare time. it is aimed by people that make more public parks and sports centers are vital rather than shopping malls in order to pass their leisure time, when new towns are think out. I completely agree with above notion and reasons behind my agreement will be analyzed in upcoming fragments.
The foremost reason why I agree with notion said above because health is more pivotal part of individual's life. if, they are healthy only then they will able to enjoy their spare time. For this purpose, more parks have to introduced so that, people can spend their free time in more productive manners. However, if individuals choose to spend time in shopping centers then they will not consume that chance in good way because shopping malls are remain crowded 24 hours due to this they get distrub and also can feel irritated from noise . For instance, according to a survey which was conducted by university of Cambridge showed the experience of people in shopping centers for spending leisure time , it resulted that 80% individuals have bad experience because of noise.
Moving further, everybody know that health is everything without health people cannot enjoy the beauty of life. it is generally considered that along with public parks, sports centers an dits facilities are also prominent in this way people can take more advantages as in one way they can gain good health and some individuals who are interested in sports can polish their talent and can brighter their future. In this way State as well as country van develop more in the field of sports. To exemplify it , a survey of last year which was conducted in India, reported that 60% players became famous and performed their talent in front of public because of sports centers.
In nutshell, it can be reiterated that public parks and sports facilities have ample of benefits for everyone. so , it is more important to construct them in every city rather than give preference to shopping centers in order to pass time in solitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89606741573 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4482278171 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.80268324 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349127941859 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121395285847 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925655655047 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23198114336 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061296170289 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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