When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To extent do you agree or disagree.
In cutting-edge era, many new ways are introduced by the help of which individuals can spend their spare time. it is aimed by people that making more public parks and sports facilities are vital rather than shopping mall in order to pass their leisure time, when new towns are thought out. I completely agree with above notion and reasons behind my agreement will be analyzed in upcoming fragments.
The foremost reason why I agree with notion because health is more pivotal part of individual's life. if, they are healthy only then they will be able to enjoy their spare time. For this purpose, more parks have to be introduced so that, people can pass their free time in more productive manners; however, if folks choose to spend time in shopping centers then they will not consume that chance in good way because shopping malls remains crowded 24 hours due to this they get disturbed and also can feel irritated from noise. For instance, according to a survey which was conducted by university of Cambridge
showed
the experience of people in shopping mall for spending leisure time, it reported that 80% people have bad experience.
Moving ahead, everybody knows that health is everything without health, people cannot enjoy the beauty of life. it is generally considered that along with public parks, sports facilities are also prominent in this way people are able to take more advantages because in one way they can gain good health and some individuals who are keen interested in sports can also polish their talent and can brighter their future. To develop their state as well as country in field of sports, it is best way. To exemplify, a survey of last year resulted that 60% players become famous and are able to
show
their talent in front of public because of sports center and its facilities.
In nutshell, it can be reiterated that it is clear that public parks and sports facilities have ample of benefits for everyone. For this, it is more important to build parks and sports facilities rather than giving preference to shopping mall in order to pass time in solitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8687150838 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41298911379 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511173184358 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0251801431 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38156798306 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134446727387 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1042794648 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215243115543 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078899820212 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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