Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can gain knowledge and information from TV programs. Besides, TV can also be seen as a companion for lonely people. To what extent do you agree with this? Explain it with your own experience.
It is much in discussion and debate these days about the usage and purpose of having a Television. Some believe it aids in entertainment only, while others believe it also serves as a companion for lonely people. Well, it actually depends on a individual person's perspective and how he or she intend to look at these things. People usually have a myriad mindset based on their environment, education, upbringing and their mindset. As far as I am concerned, I would like to put forth my ideas, opinions and perspectives in the following paragraph. I would propound an example before arriving at a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, I would like to provide my opinion by mentioning that Television is not only an entertainment unit, but also a companion for lonely people. Television was invented in the early 19th century. The sole intention of this invention was entertainment. But at present day, we have many shows being telecasted which would provide education along with entertainment.
Moving forward, I would like to propound an example in the light of recent experience that I have. When I started working a new job in different city, after my work I used to spend my most of the time on weekends watching different shows. If it wasn't for the television, I would have been the lonely person and would have been depressed.
To sum up, I would like to conclude that Television is considered as more than a entertainment unit. It serves as a companion to lonely people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly people. Well, it actually depends on a individual persons perspective and how ...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ll, it actually depends on a individual persons perspective and how he or she intend to...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'intends'.
Suggestion: intends
...l persons perspective and how he or she intend to look at these things. People usually...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...eekends watching different shows. If it wasnt for the television, I would have been t...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t Television is considered as more than a entertainment unit. It serves as a comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, well, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85375494071 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97266313016 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2581485811 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8666666667 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11849826288 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434751893113 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480317891365 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797388088321 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439128835376 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.