Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
People argue that holding a balance between the drawbacks and merits of video games can be rather rough. However, personally speaking, in spite of the amusement and entertainment they may bring, video games do spoil the younger to some extent.
On the one hand, video games benefit people especially when they are in a bad mood. The fun they give definitely relax and even cure people psychologically. For example, one of my friends who got stuck in her assignment and then transformed her attention to other things became relatively clear and would reach higher achievement subsequently. However, it is of scientific explanation that games do have an effect on people with mental diseases, but no significant solution of the roots.
On the other hand, video games distract one’s concentration on his work. As for the opposite sides, students who buried themselves into game playing may well drop their courses and busy dancing with the characters on the screens. Education can be obviously hard for schools. Instead of the advantages, society benefits less from the games as we think formerly since computers should only be a tool to attain a technical and intelligent future but not for harmless fun. The media has always warned us of instances that adults could not live independently just because no life skills, apart from games, are learned in their childhood.
To sum up, although video games help us with our difficulties sometimes, the disadvantages cannot be negligible as they often disturb the well-designed plan we made before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, as for, for example, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86251699162 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9258686816 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376065828602 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131902262376 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824237673761 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213355381409 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739241054717 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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