some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss this views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays people are more aware of the importance of environment and ecosystem because of the enormous ways it had changed our lives. It is asserted by some people that major concerning issue is the wiping out of different species of animals and plants, whereas others believe that there are more important problems to be worried about. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic which will be discussed in detail with my own opinion.
On the one hand, the main reason which supports the idea that there are more concerning problems than losing some species is that these problems can bring catastrophic consequences to human being. To begin with, industrial life style had led to increase in emissions which is produced by power plants and cars, thus the amount of released carbon dioxide is rapidly growing. As a result, people are going to grapple with environmental problems. Take global warming as an example which is a direct consequence of the mentioned reasons, and is a serious more vital compared to extinction, since it can affect not only animals and plants but also humans. For example extreme weather conditions such as flood and drought are killing people throughout the year in many parts of the world.
However, the reason why others including me holding the view that losing species is more important is that these are great source of tourist attraction and national identity which should never been gone. To elaborate more, animals and plants are not independent organization and they all are rely on each other, and losing one specie can disturb the balance of ecosystem. Due to the fact that animals and plants are in the food chain, and wiping out even only one specie can put the other species in the edge of extinction. So it will have a diverse direct impact on the disappearing of other animals.
In conclusion, people are now more concerned about environment than any other times while some people claim that environmental problems are not important that much compared to other problems, but this is my firm conviction that the importance of animals are by no means negligible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...dependent organization and they all are rely on each other, and losing one specie ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98044692737 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60198042132 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539106145251 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5580617449 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354425234293 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112641334763 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750048830257 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219443366373 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560454806387 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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