Notwithstanding the immense progression on diverse aspects of farming, there is an enormous amount of individuals who suffer from starvation around the globe. This problem is directly related to the mall management of governments and lack of appropriate laws for addressing this painful issue. In this article I will elaborate some basic reasons regarding this universal difficulty and I will attempt to release my opinion for eliminating this matter.
In our contemporary epoch, humanity has witnessed numerous alterations in the field of agriculture. According to the latest achievement in the methods of cultivation, we expect to hear no news about hunger, however, believe it or not, there are millions of hungry people around the world. Most of these individuals settled in Third World countries like Africa, some parts of Asia and so on.
The results of multitude surveys revealed that the underlying cause of shortage of food supplies in poor countries is related to their economical situations. For progressing the agricultural status, allocating significant budgets to the farmers, is principal.
By dedicating appropriate funds to this part, the cultivators could purchase some modern essential instruments. Never able farmers performing their activities on large scales, without up-to-date tools.
Additionally, the quality of seeds is the further important factor to have high-quality products. On the other hand, not to forget the effect of doing structions in rural areas and on the farming land.
Undoubtedly, to eliminate this global problem, participating the powerful governments is a must. These countries should help the poor ones, not only by donating foods and instruments but also by sharing their silence in this field.
To recapitulate, this huge problem truly reflects the defect of management and irresponsibility of some rich countries. I believe that in the light of globally cooperation between different nations, this chance is given to us to eliminate this problem in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55161290323 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11885441494 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641935483871 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0053874306 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.5625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224888166434 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619691723301 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056499510341 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088874847855 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630284612661 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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