The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.
Write at least 150 words.
important for the growth of a child. The pie chart in this task illustrates participation in different activities such as leisure and cultural activities of children. The left and right figures are differentiated by gender where the left one belongs to boys and the right one belong to the girls.
From both the figures we have found out that only boys participate in basketball whereas dancing is reserved for girls only. Then we also got to know that from these figures is that reading more popular with girls and on the contrary, boys are mostly involved with computer games. Lastly from the figures we have analyzed that Outdoor games like soccer and skateboarding are completely boy centric but gymnastics and netball are reserved to girls only.
Firstly, from the figure we have depicted that basketball is very popular with boys and that is why a staggering 26% of boys spend their leisure time using this activity. On the contrary, girls love to dance and for that reason around 27% of them spend time using this.
Secondly, girls are very keen in reading and as a result, 21% of them uses their leisure time doing this but boys are not much fond of because 2% of them use their off time for this. But a completely contrasting picture can be found in terms computer games since the popularity of it is more than double (34-16%) for boys compared to the girls.
Lastly in boys and girls have different taste in choice in terms of outdoor games. Boys mostly participate in football and skateboard having total percentage of 28% whereas girls are mainly involved in Gymnastics and Netball since in total 26% of them spend their leisure time for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45859814958 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461805555556 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3121120673 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142756857258 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637814510009 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769758119173 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900820776021 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047858469354 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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