Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. However, others think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are always arguing about the benefits between team sports and individual sports but they forget the main purpose of sports is to improve the morale and health of the players. However, in my own opinion, individual sports are more beneficial for athletes.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that many people consider team sports to be the best. First is unity to improve the spirit of the team. For example, with a squad of 11 people in football, there will be 11 thoughts and decisions. If every member does not practice and prepare well for the strategy, they will never understand each other and create obstacles between them. Furthermore, team sports can help athletes gain communication skills from mutual understanding. When the team is playing, players will have the opportunity to make friends with other members, and gradually in the process of training will help form a friendship. Finally is the mutual support between teammates. Each participant will have their own strengths and weaknesses. But this will not stop them from playing sport as they are overcome and enhance each other's weaknesses to become better.
However, solo sports offer more benefits for the player than team sports. Begin with the improvement of physical fitness and health. Physical fitness and health can be improved by any form of sports but if it comes from individual sports it is still the best. In lieu of waiting for teammates to help overcome athletes' own weaknesses, players should choose another option of training with a lot of effort to overcome their own weaknesses. As a result, you'll have a well-rounded fitness base that contributes to your overall health and wellness. Next is to help players to become more independent in their own mindset and action. Individual sports such as martial arts, swimming, athletics, to name but a few will require athletes to create their own strategies. For example, the player can calculate time for breathing, controlling emotions without being dominated by others. Finally is creates self-motivation and mental toughness. Individual sports teach athletes to motivate themselves. This will help players overcome the fear of failure and keep moving forward. If it is in team sports, athletes may get reprimanded by other teammates.
In conclusion, all types of sports really bring benefits such as improving the health and spirit of athletes. However, I believe that athletes should choose individual sport because the benefits outweigh the benefits of team sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20393120393 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70163034343 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484029484029 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2926833742 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.72 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.28 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191715182811 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061722527571 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055566509798 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144626580902 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606568394774 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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