art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate turn their focus on science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take interest in art
Art has always played a vital role in enriching cultures all over the world. However, people are showing less and less interest in art these days, instead of concentrating on main sectors such as science, technology, and business. Therefore, this essay will analyze reasons why this trend happens and suggest possible ways to boost people’s interest in arts
While it is true that art enriches culture, it plays little or no role in improving our lives. People do not admire great paintings or marvel at brilliant sculptures to live comfortably without money and modern technologies that improve the quality of human life. obviously, Science and technology which are focused on much bring huge benefits for people. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job opportunities for humans. Eventually, it will be very crucial and helpful for people in the future, if they study scientific subjects such as artificial intelligence, machine learning, and data analysis. Hence, an occupation that is related to technology always guarantees a good salary. Besides, if people set up shops or companies as well as become management or boss, they have a higher income than focusing on art or taking part in exhibitions. For example, according to a practical survey, the majority of people tend to choose jobs to focus on technology and business more than on art
Art is the backbone of our culture. Understandably, a Lack of interest in art will eventually lead to the death of rich cultural heritage across the world. The government should carry out policies to revive the interest of young generations in art. the authorities divide a budget for developing the art field by constructing art schools and maintaining art galleries. Organizing cultural events will generate jobs for many and will attract many tourists. An increase in the number of tourists will help generate more revenue. The better financial prospects will act as a boost for people to pursue art as a passion and a career option. For example, in Vietnam, the government invest the amount of money in erecting art schools
In conclusion, subjects such as science, technology, and business are lucrative in terms of job prospects, but art is a source of livelihood. The joint efforts of the government and the people need for the survival of art.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ways to boost people’s interest in arts While it is true that art enriches cultu...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...that improve the quality of human life. obviously, Science and technology which are focus...
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Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...benefits for people. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job oppo...
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Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...benefits for people. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job opportunities ...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ople. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job opportunities for humans....
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Line 2, column 1003, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: art
...on technology and business more than on art Art is the backbone of our culture. Underst...
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Line 2, column 1006, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...technology and business more than on art Art is the backbone of our culture. Unde...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e interest of young generations in art. the authorities divide a budget for develop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08638743455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301524814 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568062827225 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6518314051 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.944444444 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213806406019 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070224899378 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360230087109 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132793898375 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381130521095 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ways to boost people’s interest in arts While it is true that art enriches cultu...
^^^
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...that improve the quality of human life. obviously, Science and technology which are focus...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...benefits for people. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job oppo...
^^^^
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...benefits for people. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job opportunities ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ople. Both sectors offer many knowledge as well as countless job opportunities for humans....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1003, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: art
...on technology and business more than on art Art is the backbone of our culture. Underst...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1006, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...technology and business more than on art Art is the backbone of our culture. Unde...
^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e interest of young generations in art. the authorities divide a budget for develop...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08638743455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301524814 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568062827225 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6518314051 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.944444444 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213806406019 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070224899378 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360230087109 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132793898375 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381130521095 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.