A poor infrastructure hinders under developed countries from progress and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Developed countries are growing further owing to their rational infrastructure. Many people calm that impoverished countries should overcome issues of undeveloped infrastructure by taking assistance from external sources, to flourish as prosperous nations. In my opinion, I partly agree with this view and the advanced facility is not the only factor determining the success of a nation
There are some main reasons why international supports are one of the most effective solutions for improving the nation's s infrastructure. Firstly, in poor countries, they cannot afford to invest that kind of money, they have to struggle with inadequate infrastructure such as lack of power supplies and water distribution systems, education, and hospital, so human of the countries face difficulties about health problems or unemployment. Therefore, receiving investments from developed countries is helpful for governments in improving and developing the poor infrastructure as well as the economy. In addition, the poor countries are indebted to the developed nations with a huge amount of money, so encouraging big countries in investment is a positive approach to reduce loans as well as bring many economic benefits for both sides. For example, Korea encourage the USA to invest in infrastructure or military to reduce loans
Good infrastructure alone will not ensure the development of a nation. Along with infrastructure, it is important to invest in areas such as education and healthcare. In addition to building hospitals, the government must ensure that quality healthcare is provided at these places for free or at affordable rates and Social welfare schemes should also be given a push. To improve the development of the country, education is considered an important sector. Good quality of education generates talents in the future who will contribute to building a modern and progressive country. For instance, in Vietnam, the quality of education is the main target of the government in investment policies
In conclusion, improving the infrastructure in poor countries by international aids is an active way; however, together with facility, education, and healthcare is considered as of importance in developing the nation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The proper name in singular (Korea) must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
...fits for both sides. For example, Korea encourage the USA to invest in infrastructure or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56764705882 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31314227957 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4927101599 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.75 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232088182355 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082083486828 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384343825611 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143455073308 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473266783011 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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