You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
– explain why you would like the job
– give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
– say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position of an au pair that was advertised in the weekly issue of Sydney magazine.

My name is Rina Sam and I am an exchange student at Melbourne University. Origionally, I am from India, and I have completed my English language course with flying colors. Moreover, I have been given a stay permit for 8 months in which I am allowed to work. Since by staying with your family I can not only further brush up on my English skills but also understand the traditional culture of an Australian family.

I think I will be most suited for this position because I am an homely person and like to cook and clean. While I am staying at your house, I will cook various varities of delicious Indian food, if you prefer to eat them. Also, during my ideal time I can take your daughter to a park or for a walk. In addition, I am experience in looking after young kids as I am the eldest in my family and I have three younger sibilings. I have helped my parents to take care of them from their early years. After staying with you, I intend to explore Queensland and spend by rest duration there.

Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Rina Sam.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t suited for this position because I am an homely person and like to cook and clea...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Rina Sam.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40329218107 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50614918867 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625514403292 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.813650973 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4285714286 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22088551069 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763270423526 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265356049229 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132569768271 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263189117311 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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