People have a different viewpoints about maintaining good health. some have believed that doing physical activities helps to keep health, others opine eating balanced diet I will discuss both the views in the following paragraphs along with a conclusion
On the one hand, some individuals believe that doing regular activities will help to maintain health and live free from diseases. so people indulge themselves in jogging, walking like activities. Doing exercises surely aid to burn calories which reduces the body weight to control chronic diseases like diabetics hypertension .certainly, regular exercise is the utmost important for good health
On the other hand , other individuals have belief having good eating habits are more vital than doing exercise because it provides vitamins, minerals to all parts of our body.To illustrate , if people are doing exercises and do not having nutrient foods they will definitely face health-related problems.Doctors stating that obesity and exercising out may lead to health issues so it is important to have proper nutrition and exercise to lead a healthy life
To conclude, it is certainly important to exercise regularly but to stay fit and healthy , proper balanced diet must be included
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 192.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46354166667 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84078495694 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.5024630542 234% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 294.803642277 50.4703680194 584% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.25 104.977214359 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 20.9669160288 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31944763982 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159650478803 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788132430787 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193834105539 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728607912516 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 12.6369458128 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 53.1260098522 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.9458128079 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.3980295567 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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