The picture illustrates the process of water cycle in which water from the surface of Earth travels to the air and back again to the land.
Overall, there are three main stages in the water cycle including the evaporation of water, precipitation, and eventually water running back to the ocean.
Beginning with the evaporation of water, approximately 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the ocean. Under the function of heat from the sun, the water vapour is condensed in order to form clouds. In the next stage, the cloud formations are precipitated and fall into the surface of the Earth as a form of rain or snow.
In the third stage, rainwater on the surface of the earth undergoes various paths to go to the ocean. Some water fall into lakes or return to the ocean via ‘surface runoff’. Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the Earth and then pouring to the ocean. However, the process of salt water intrusion takes place before the water enters the ocean to re-initiate the cycle.
- The bar chart describes the sales of different goods in pounds in the UK over four seasons in 2015 67
- The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth 95
- The bar graph below shows the percentage of immigrants to Australia from five countries in 1962 1982 and 2002 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant 73
- The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household and the table shows the amount of eletricity used according to the number of occupants Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 89
- A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the Earth as a form of rain or snow. In the third stage, rainwater on the sur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83425414365 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55903109622 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508287292818 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2599679434 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304942624242 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137944809688 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811552077567 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220180340873 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580258893434 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.