Majority of masses emphasis on foreigners tourism has catastrophic effect on their country. There are couple of solutions to tackle this problem. I will discuss their reason and outcomes in upcoming paragraphs.
Despite, international tourism has detrimental effects on their country as well as lifestyle such as traditional and customs. For instance, traveller wear their customary and wear inappropriate cloth depicts skins which adopted by youth of their country and older can not tolerate these type of change. As a result, local people feel uncomfortable when they illustrate this in their own area because they follow their customs.
Futhermore, foreign tourism has a harmful effects on their environment. It influence has continually been noticed that they throw rubbish in their surroundings irresponsibly, which is caused of the water and air pollution.
On the other side, this situation can be improved adoption different kind of solutions which create balance both side. Government should plays a paramount role to solve this problem. Moreover, government should increase the awareness among the foreigners through different media such as roads billboards as well as social site and play advertisement will show country beauty, their importance and rules.
In conclude, although many individual believe that foreigners tourism brings negative effects to their countries while there are numbers of solutions to solve this problem. In my opinion I mentioned before government's involvement must to tackle these negative attitude and build balance in both sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foreigners'' or 'foreigner's'?
Suggestion: foreigners'; foreigner's
Majority of masses emphasis on foreigners tourism has catastrophic effect on thei...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...thermore, foreign tourism has a harmful effects on their environment. It influence has ...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
...armful effects on their environment. It influence has continually been noticed that they ...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foreigners'' or 'foreigner's'?
Suggestion: foreigners'; foreigner's
..., although many individual believe that foreigners tourism brings negative effects to thei...
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Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...entioned before governments involvement must to tackle these negative attitude and buil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68776371308 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89644545714 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7972498983 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271114277915 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914272672355 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648012191241 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145032574264 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695725076611 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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