Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is obvious that playing sports is good for your health. And now people argue about which type of sports they should play to have more advantages. Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. In this essay, I will tell you how I think about it.
To sports played in team, there are some advantages for people, especially young people. Firstly, team sports teach us a lot of valuable life lesson. In a team sports, we will help each other, learn how to cooperate and aim to general goal. There have been plenty of cases that a member injures when he is playing soccer, it is because of team spirit. Second, team sports will teach us useful new skills, especially leading skill. It is a very necessary skill nowadays. Each certain organization always need a leader leading them to right path. If not, the organization won't stand for long.
On the other hand, taking part in individual sports has its own benefits. When we are alone, we learn how to be independent. It is a good habit to try your best and reach to the aim by yourselves. Moreover, it will enhance our concentrating ability. When you concentrae on something, the work will be very effective.
In conclusion, both types of sports are beneficial in many aspects. However, in my opinion, I prefer to the later, because it is up to me when I want to play it, in my way and in my free time. But I suggest you to join both of them because life is only beautiful when you spend time equally on yourself and enjoying people surrounding you.
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- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football But others think taking part in individual sports is better like swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54697986577 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49057726064 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.710593073 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5238095238 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1904761905 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370308315378 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110792496897 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143348517206 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2148238358 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175441545708 0.056905535591 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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