Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people beleive that it is more advantage to participate in sports which are played in teams, like basketball, volleyball and football. But on other aspect, some people advice that take part in individual sports is more significant, like marathon, table tennis and swimming. In my opinion both views have their own benefit and drawback with each person. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly.
On the one hand, teenagers who join in sport which are played in groups will know the important of team mate. playing or doing some things with their friends will be easier and more simple, they can also improve their mentality and their physical health. Furthermore, team mate can help each other better than before. Developing together and they can improve their strength and fix their weakness. For instance, their friends at football teams can teach them the knowledge out gymmastics and news skill to get a best perform in the match. In the nagative aspect, with teenagers who do not have ability for playing sport or have a terrible perform at the game will be shy, sad and complexity. some friends will bored, bullying and violent to them, taking a lot of pressure will make an bad influence to them in the future.
On the other hand, taking part in individual sports will help student more independent, confident and braver. They can fee for creating follow their own style and do not denpend on teams mate to get success. Moreover, teenagers can concentrate on the sports and they are not get disturb, annoy and bother by their bad friends. For example, some terrible people want their friends worse and worse because they are jeolous with the talent of their friends. In addition, playing in individual are more boring and unhappy than take part in team sports. And also when people get failure they have to take pressure, criticism and stigma from the sociaty alone.
To conclude, students who take part in team sports and participate in individual are have advantage and drawback appropriate with each person, so it is necessary to have a bright choice for improving themselves to better than before and becom a helpful person to their country in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91913746631 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43431595607 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485175202156 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4006360233 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.388888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298584210707 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11043761833 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097942694782 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218645518248 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108741827705 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.