Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that peoples age group represents the pattern of shopping. This essay agrees with the statement due to the facts of peer pressure, modernisation, and fashion trends accompanied by the age group may lead to excessive purchasing.
On the one hand, people who often buy things irrespective of age would be the necessities, households, and the daily needs. Some other shopping carried out by the academic purpose or employment desires. Simlarly, despite the age people went for the shopping for festivals, marriage or other important gatherings and so on. For instance, family reunion or official functions members may used to do purchasing to cope with other members without considering the age.
On the other hand, most of the shopping are depend to the people age even it is relevant or irrelevant. Such as, many youngsters are forced to do shopping to be the part of society, friends and colleagues. They often rely on advanced technology, changing trends, modern fashionable outfits even though it is avoidable. Likewise, children shopping might be the toys, vehicles, and story books while, adolescents are concentrated to electronic gadgets, trending cloths, and sports items. In contrast to youth, old age groups do shopping mostly for the supportive equipment for activities of daily living such as, toilet raiser, crutches etc. Elder people may have genuine concern regarding to the shopping like price, value, and quality. Whereas most of the teenagers mainly thinks about the updates, trends and fashion choices instead of money and materials. This attitude also plays a major role in shopping.
To sum up, everyone have their own interest related to the shopping though, overwhelming majority of purchasing goods and stuff are interconnected to their age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... value, and quality. Whereas most of the teenagers mainly thinks about the update...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33687943262 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81370186108 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4727912031 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174246601888 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572507475358 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410753569969 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102970049245 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290966344826 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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