Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
There is an irrefutable fact that teenagers are now spending less time doing physical activities than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons are suggested to be a crucial part of the study program. I completely agree with the statement as this new rule will be beneficial to students’ mental and physical health.
First of all, lack of physical activity has numerous amount of adverse impacts on children's health. Sitting in one place for a long time may lead to a higher increase in the possibility of falling memory or endurance destroy. Likewise, being less active makes adolescents face more risks of mental illnesses, such as depression, anxiety, insomnia, etc
On the opposite side of the consequences, sports would certainly bring about significant advantages if it is confirmed as a compulsory subject at schools. To begin with, athletics not only help children enhance their health or their attitude but also have a good influence on children's mood and relief their stress after hours of studying. Furthermore, playing sport permits students to learn about teamwork, which is a crucial skill that children are required to have if they expect to become successful in life.
Taking the evidence into consideration, due to multiple merits of physical activity that affect children; I believe that it will not be a wrong decision to make sports a compulsory subject in institutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch as depression, anxiety, insomnia, etc On the opposite side of the consequences...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89130155663 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.940711448 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208359542803 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812543224352 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454285550254 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118511204321 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384473978716 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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