The charts show the demographics of people who purchase Jeans Summaries the information given and make comparisons wherever relevant

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The charts show the demographics of people who purchase Jeans. Summaries the information given and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The charts show the demographics of people who purchase Jeans. There are three category of jeans straight, skinny and slim jeans.

In considering straight jeans, the age group 16-24 and 25-34 have approximately 30-32 percent of people who buy straight jeans. The male who buy straight jeans are approximately 28 percent. In overall, category 45+ age group have less percent which is 10 percent buy straight jeans. The female and 35-44 age group are in between 20-25 percent.

In considering skinny jeans, the age group 16-24 and 25-34 have approximately 30-31 percent of people who buy skinny jeans. The approximately 28 percent of male who buy skinny jeans. In category 45+ age group have less percent which is 8 percent who buy skinny jeans. The female and 35-44 age group are in between 18-25 percent.

In last, Considering slim jeans the major age group is 45+ which is 20 percent. The nearer to this 25-34 age group which is 17 percent who buy slim jeans. The rest male, female, 16-24 and 35-44 age group people are in 2 percent to 8 percent.

In overall, the age group 45+ have less percent in buying straight and skinny jeans which is higher in slim jeans.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'categories'?
Suggestion: categories
...ple who purchase Jeans. There are three category of jeans straight, skinny and slim jean...
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Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
...ple who purchase Jeans. There are three category of jeans straight, skinny and slim jean...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40015246994 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 106.607317073 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.295566502463 0.547539520022 54% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2436078551 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953062344779 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697286060611 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110242280898 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100914197192 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103832695197 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.5 8.06136585366 68% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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