In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
As large shops in the suburbs are gaining more and more popularity, small stores in the heart of towns are losing their attractiveness. Consequently, customers without cars have difficulty travelling to out-of-town stores, which might lead to an upward trend in the utility of cars. From my perspective, although this phenomenon brings both merits and demerits, it does more good than harm.
My verdict is that going out to the suburbs to do shopping comes with several undeniable advantages in terms of shopping experience and time-saving. Regarding customers’ experience, large stores bring more sense of satisfaction and pleasure. This is derived from the fact that substantial shopping malls in the periphery of towns often cover integrated facilities. Consequently, demands of different ages can be easily met. For example, while parents are shopping, their offspring can relish time in the kid zone. Besides, various one-stop-shops are also time-saving as shopping and doing others such as eating and watching movies can be done simultaneously. On the contrary, shops in town which dominate small areas do not have enough space for other amenities besides stores, thus they are less attractive than huge out-of-town stores.
Another perk is that the out-of-town shops create positive competition with local counterparts, driving overall economic growth. This results from the fact that large malls in the suburbs often offer better job opportunities for professional employees with expertise and experience, thus more probability of attaining lucrative income and career development. On the other hand, the proliferation of huge stores in the periphery seems to take away customers of small shops, however, competition is a part of development. To be more precise, the growth of big out-of-town shops motivates local shops to channel their efforts into becoming more innovative, and competitive to draw customers’ attention. Therefore, customers and the economy can take advantage of this change.
In conclusion, although the proliferation of large out-of-town stores may have adverse effects on small shops in town, I concur that significant benefits outweigh this negligible drawback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63663663664 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09636842241 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.306990137 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318750270847 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100876463662 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887551031131 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224047292549 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502118245827 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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