when you face difficult problems in life what do you feel is the best way to solve them asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem finding information about the problem using the internet taking a long time to think about the problem.
No one can deny everyone has period when one felt difficulties in his life, but there is a famous qoute that ''every problem has a solution. There are many way to solve a particular problem. On the internet there is a world wide web which is abbreviated as www has offered a social village. One can google whatever he wants within seconds. In my opinion better path to find out the solution of a problem to get help of a person which have personal experience about the problem. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it can be say without a shadow of a doubt that an experienced person have better understanding. this is because that he has invested plenty of time and obvious other factors also included. I can explain it with my personal experience. two years ago, when I was preparing for competitive exam to get admission in highly recognised institute of science. In my 1st attempt I did terrible mistakes and did not get the expected result and another mistake in 2nd attempt then I decided to take advise from one of my seniors who already pursuing his degree. Then he shared his experience and strategy and thanks to him I was able to get admission too.
In contrast, it is the fact that you can get the solution of almost every questions on internet,but it would not be an exaggeration to say that sometimes one can get mislead just following blindly. Most of the content on internet are found fake. On the top of that one must spend more time to search from various site and to read it without gaurentty as not practical as a person in front of you. As from the previous example search for strategy during preparation I spent a lot of valuable time but it didn't work properly but wasted my time. that time I followed many online resources for study material but it was not so impressive.
In conclusion, I tend to say that it is always better to find solution of a problem by talking from a person with experience because he has better understanding as well as advise us to avoid repeat mistakes and would be less time-consuming and we can believe with more certainty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, well, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50512820513 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66842767297 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510256410256 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9806766798 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4736842105 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215659419856 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639927445091 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656158226265 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132738247569 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766364322573 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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