Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others however think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Human's health has become the major issue where our society struggles to stay fit. The health of the people mainly depends on their food habits and their physical lifestyle. A group of public believes that the government should take responsibility on providing healthy foods, but others oppose that it is an individual's choices to their food habits. Both sides of argument will be discussed in this essay before the conclusion is reached.
On one hand, the ruling management should make proper rules and regulation on producing healthier foods. The strict laws on manufacturing non-nutritious foodstuffs will adhere public on healthy foods. For example, implementing heavy taxes on junk and fast foods has reduced its total consumption by public of 20% in a month based on survey released by Indian times. Thus, government implementing laws will bring change in staying fit.
On other hand, although eating healthy food is a great concern to everyone but it totally depends on personal choice. There may be plenty of healthier food options for an individual but selecting foods is their sole responsibility. For instance, in a supermarket 70% of un-healthy products were sold compared to healthy products in a period of four hours. Thus, individual are responsible on selecting healthy products.
After examining both sides, it is felt that people should choose the healthy lifestyle products while government should ensure the quality of products sold in stores. Based on this initiative the government shall be wealthy and its people shall be healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29838709677 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81449302144 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7468982612 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203855843819 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678812046187 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353771919349 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119699162234 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491210847752 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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