Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers any more Do you agree or disagree

It is said that printed newspapers have become obsolete. I find myself in complete agreement with this opinion for the following reasons.
To begin with, the primary reason why I believe that traditional newspapers soon become obsolete on print media getting the latest information is slow rather than electronic devices. For example, information about the plane crash on the same day on the internet as well as television but on print media, it was available after one day. Moreover, in traditional newspapers information about celebrities, which is tough to find.
Furthermore, I believe that online news media has far more technological tools to present news to the viewers than printed newspapers. On top of that, the internet is more fastly updated than the newspapers. For instance, today with the help of search engines like Google, youtube,... and so on accessing information has become more convenient than in the past.
That is not to say that traditional newspaper does not necessary reading printed newspaper is not only a habit but also a culture for many human beings which many people think that there is a different appeal to holding a printed newspaper than reading on the computer screen, but we cannot deny that the new generation is on the path of swift changing cultures and habits, according to the social changes.
I believe, as the world is moving ahead with technology, we would not be surprised if printed newspapers become a thing of the past.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'newspapers'' or 'newspaper's'?
Suggestion: newspapers'; newspaper's
...after one day. Moreover, in traditional newspapers information about celebrities, which is...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...p of search engines like Google, youtube,... and so on accessing information has b...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04508196721 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79267419489 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569672131148 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.4335001491 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.909090909 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168810330467 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061329429538 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467800263395 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946751297039 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355884616677 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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