Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
It is no doubt that globalization is happening at a breakneck pace and the world has become a smaller place in our minds. As the result, many cosmopolitan cities have arisen in different nations, from China to the USA. However, so many are the difference between cultures gathered in one place could evoke certain problems such as racism. Thus, governments should implement various effective measures, which will be discussed in this essay, to maintain family-friendly neighbourhoods in these cities.
First and foremost, education is of great importance in this scenario. Unless people understand and respect each other culture, it is unlikely that they could live peacefully in the same area. Therefore, opportunities to learn and experience other cultures should be supported by the authorities. Exchange students or study abroad scholarships, for example, are great ways to enhance the friendship between nations and offer students chances to be exposed to different cultures. However, this method only benefits the young, meanwhile, the elderly still holds a conservative view about different nationality people.
In addition, homogenous nationality neighbourhoods should not be allowed because it might create a sense of community where outsiders, people from different regions, are not feeling welcomed. Singapore, for instance, allocates families living in condominiums with various nationalities next-door households in order to erase the racism. A drawback of this solution is that the governing tasks would be demanding.
In conclusion, with great effort in educating people and creating mixed culture friendly neighbourhoods for cosmopolitan citizens, people might find it is not hard to live harmoniously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15945845587 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5506659625 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14892743373 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499350527397 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540558355432 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992319033607 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462512389147 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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